6 thoughts on “[The sun is painted on the sky]

    1. I wrote that one a long time ago and just fiddled with it recently. I think it at least helped get me into my first poetry-writing seminar with Robert Hass. He liked that line too.

      1. Sure, but it’s always a decade in the wilderness, hungry, tormented, burned by the molten iron in the smithy of my soul. 🙂

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